Much better!
I agree with your first thought: Too thick for whatever reason - or the conditions.
I've used most of the brands of varnish and have not settled on one that I prefer so much that I go looking for it.
I've used Epifanes and I recall it was more finicky. It was thicker than most right out of the can. But it's a nice varnish and if you can work with it, will build fast.
I've used cheaper hardware store spar varnish for many years and got some of my best results. Easiest to apply I think because it's thinner right out of the can. There are varying reports on the amount of UV protection in the various brands. A bit of mystery, a bit of marketing. I've never found a bad one.
The boatyard in my harbor has varnish wizards. Most of their work is done inside. But quite a bit of their maintenance varnish work is done at the docks. In spring (notoriously wet here), there is often a boat with it's house fogged by flat sanding.
When I look at this prep work for a maintenance coat, I note that they use sanding blocks of various kinds and lightly hand sand until the entire surface is foggy, no gloss. But you can see it's a light sanding. On this boat - with a varnish coating probably over 10 years old - some dimples and dings are below the surface and still look glossy.
Keep in mind: Because they (yard) have always maintained this boat that is painted and varnished; all of those surfaces, through seasons of maintenance - are dead flat from their skilled prep work.
Lot's of dings and damage but the wood (over 60 years old on this boat), is protected from the elements. Protection; that's what the yard is looking for. Varnish, often mistaken for a cosmetic coating is first a protective coating.
Because it's a clear coating, you can see the state of the wood beneath(which you can't with paint). The fact the look of varnish is appealing, is secondary. Over all, for this type of wooden boat with a bright house, varnish (easy on- easy off), is the best and cheapest way to preserve the wood.
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Because they are pro's - and the owners expect it(and pay for it), they achieve that beautiful coating, even outside(waiting for cooperative weather). For them, it's little more work; in fact, a near perfect finish, is probably the fastest; it will make next years prep easier.
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I don't achieve these results, but I learn quite a bit just watching them.
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